Hey, not too bad of a piece, bro. Better than some of the other things I've seen in Under Judgment.
The art could definitely be better, as well as the audio and general animation style. The song's catchy enough for a star and a half, though, but it just feel rather rushed
I kinda rushed it because I wanted it to be bad, its a basic runner up on what I do, bad things.
Although it lowers self of steam it makes me giggle a bit.
There is a lot of potential behind this project, definitely. The opening theme is very much catchy and gets the crowd rowling. The story is also mildly intriguing in terms of structure, and the music choices are decent. However, the art style, dialogue, and delivery are very shotty. The characters are ok, but can really be grating and irritating, and at times it really does feel like I'm watching the dub to a bad anime. It's ok for a small, first-time long-term project, but I would work on quality instead of quantity. I understand that you're trying to make a series out of this, with episodes as long as 11-12 minutes, but it feels rather rushed, and people are going to lose you after your long introduction.
It probably looks rushed because I'm still a beginner. ^_^() And yes, unfortunately I myself voice a few characters in the first episode and I'm not that good a vocie actor, however from the secon episode onwards all major characters will be voices by great VAs. =D Thanks for you awesome feedback sir, it means a lot when you say it has a lot of potential. =D
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