There is a lot of potential behind this project, definitely. The opening theme is very much catchy and gets the crowd rowling. The story is also mildly intriguing in terms of structure, and the music choices are decent. However, the art style, dialogue, and delivery are very shotty. The characters are ok, but can really be grating and irritating, and at times it really does feel like I'm watching the dub to a bad anime. It's ok for a small, first-time long-term project, but I would work on quality instead of quantity. I understand that you're trying to make a series out of this, with episodes as long as 11-12 minutes, but it feels rather rushed, and people are going to lose you after your long introduction.

It's ok, but the movement is rather eh. You might want to add more texture and depth in to the art, but otherwise it seems like an interesting concept. Just might need a little bit more work, that's all.

Hey, this is really good. Is it ok if I use it as the opening to one of my games that I'm working on?